How to Write an About Page People Actually Read
There is a strange truth about the About page. It is one of the most visited pages on almost any small business website, and it is also one of the most poorly written. Owners tend to treat it as a formality, a place to stack up years in business and a stiff paragraph about their commitment to quality. Meanwhile the visitor who clicked it, a real person deciding whether to trust you with their money, quietly gives up and leaves.
They clicked for a reason. They wanted to know who they would be dealing with, whether you are the real thing, and whether you understand their problem. A great About page answers exactly that. Here is how to write one people actually read to the end.
Understand why they clicked
Nobody visits your About page out of idle curiosity about your history. They click it because they are on the fence and want reassurance. They are asking, quietly, "Can I trust these people?" Everything you write should serve that question.
This reframes the whole page. It is not really about you. It is about giving a nervous stranger enough reason to believe in you. The moment you write with that reader in mind instead of your own resume, the page gets warmer, clearer, and far more convincing.
Open with them, not you
The most common mistake is opening with "We were founded in 2009." Nobody outside your family cares about your founding date in the first sentence. Open instead with something that shows you understand the reader and what they need.
A pest control company could start with the relief of finally sleeping without worrying about what is in the walls. A bookkeeper could open with the dread of tax season and the calm of having it handled. When you lead with the customer's world, they feel seen, and a seen customer keeps reading. You can get to your story in a moment, once they are leaning in.
Tell a real, human story
Once you have their attention, tell them who you are, and tell it like a human. Why did you start this business? What do you care about getting right? What makes you a little different from the shop down the road? People connect with people, not with faceless companies, so let some personality through.
You do not need a dramatic tale. A genuine one is plenty:
- The problem you kept seeing that made you want to do it better.
- What you believe about how the work should be done.
- A small, true detail that makes you memorable and real.
Honesty beats polish here. A slightly imperfect, genuine story earns more trust than a flawless corporate paragraph that could belong to anyone.
Show the faces
If you are comfortable with it, put real photos of yourself and your team on the page. Not stiff, awkward headshots, just warm, real images of the actual humans a customer will meet. Seeing a face makes an enormous difference. It turns an anonymous business into people, and people are far easier to trust than a logo.
For a small business, this is often your advantage over bigger competitors. You are not a call center. You are a real person who will actually answer the phone and stand behind the work. Show that.
Back the story with proof
A good story pulls people in, but proof seals the trust. Weave in the things that show you are the real deal, not just a nice tale. Years of experience, relevant certifications or training, the number of customers you have helped, or a short, genuine review from a happy client. Keep it woven into the narrative rather than dumped as a bragging list. The story gives the proof meaning, and the proof gives the story weight.
End by pointing the way forward
Here is a step people forget. A reader who finishes your About page feeling good about you is primed to act, so tell them what to do next. Do not just trail off. Invite them warmly to get in touch, book a visit, or call for a quote, and make that next step easy and obvious.
The About page often sits right before the decision to reach out. If you have done your job and earned their trust, a gentle nudge at the end turns that trust into an actual inquiry rather than a warm feeling that quietly evaporates.
Keep it tight
One last thing. Do not let the page sprawl into a novel. Say what matters, make it warm, and stop. A tight, well-told About page that respects the reader's time will always beat a rambling one that buries the good parts. Read it out loud and cut anything that makes you drift.
Where we help
Writing your story is something only you can truly do, and the steps above should get you there. Turning that story into a page that looks professional, reads beautifully on a phone, and sits in the right place in your site is where our team takes over.
At Catapult, our design studio builds your professional website with an About page designed to build trust, laid out with your story, your team, and your proof in a way that keeps people reading and moves them to reach out. It is $79 to launch and $9 a month for hosting, and with unlimited change requests you can update your story, swap a photo, or add a new team member any time just by asking. Most sites are live in about 48 hours, and you keep your own domain. Write the real story of why you do what you do, and let us give it a home that turns strangers into customers.